However, there were a few places where the fit of the words to the psalm tone was more or less strained. The one that stands out the most in my mind right now is the last line of the Hail Mary. I think, in stead of descending on “our death Amen,” you should have descended on “of our death”, and just added “Amen” as dotted notes, recto tono. I don’t know if that disturbs too much the psalm tone, but it seems to me the only you can convey the sense that the prayer should finish with “death” on the last note, and the “Amen” should be added to it.